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Katou/Kurai. Interesting pairing, bad fanfic. [Jul. 31st, 2006|12:22 pm]
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[winter_ruins]
[mood |boredbored]

While looking through the pit, I got distracted by Katou fic! =D So, being a fangirl I clicked. ....Boy, do I regret it.

TITLE: Cigarette Taste
AUTHOR: Sailor Ra
REASON FOR COMPLAINT:



Kato sighed annoyingly because he was bored.

When that's the sentence that greets you when you read a fanfic, you just know it's going to be bad. I don't know why I continued reading.

Kato’s blue eyes lingered on the person that just entered the stone hallway.

His eyes are brown. B.R.O.W.N. But of course, how could I have forgotten? Every blond has blue eyes. =/

“Going to wait for Modu?” Kato asked as Kurai stopped dead in her tracks. She then turned to him and glared at him.

....Who the hell is Modu?

Kato’s mind instantly gained an idea to cure him of his boredom. Kato would never feel love for anyone, but that didn’t mean that he didn’t enjoy screwing around with people.

Maybe pre-Setsuna-saving-him Katou. =/ After Setsuna saved him, he did grow to love Setsuna. And Kira. And Uriel. And Doll. OTP. He changed a lot after that.

He quickly grabbed her right wrist and pulled him to her. His free hand caught her chin and instantly planted a rough kiss on her lips. Kurai’s blue eyes widen in the pure horror. He tasted of cigarettes and something else, but the demon girl couldn’t identify.

“Kato, that’s enough,” Kira said as Kato pulled away with a smirk on his face.


Wow, Katou's getting bold. =/ Kissing her right in front of Kira.

“Isn’t she a bit young for you? And knowing Setsuna, he’ll kill you for treating her like that,” Kira warned as Kato smirked at him.

“But that’s life. Adults screw little kids all the time,” Kato pointed out the truth as Kira nodded.

...Kurai's... how many centuries old? And Kira knows that. =/ And ... it doesn't happen all the time. WTF?
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[User Picture]From: transcending
2006-08-01 02:32 am (UTC)
Well, they get points for an original pairing, at least. o_O

However, I have problems recognizing this character as Katou. I think he's a pod person.
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[User Picture]From: winter_ruins
2006-08-01 03:29 am (UTC)
Oh, she loses no points for originality. Go look at her other fanfics and please report one.
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[User Picture]From: transcending
2006-08-01 03:38 am (UTC)
So many bizarre crossovers! *dies*

However, I can't help but like the fact that she's open-minded and doesn't female-bash. She also does not appear to be completely incompetent. I think she could write a lot better, to be honest. :x
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[User Picture]From: winter_ruins
2006-08-01 03:40 am (UTC)
...T_T She broke up Hakura and Michiru! By sticking Hakura with Rapheal!
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[User Picture]From: transcending
2006-08-01 03:45 am (UTC)
...dot dot dot...

Holy. That would be king of bizarre crossovers. If she wasn't flamed for that one, I'd be very surprised.
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